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yes I will

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a dark morning being on an eclipse day that happen ones in a while seeing as the planet has two habitat moons. i brought Venus breakfast in bed, I do that some times when i get up before her soon enough but i had had something i wanted to give her for a while and never had a good opportunity till now, the old now or never scenario in my mind as I woke her up to her favorite kind of breakfast a stone baked bread some coffee butter and things like meats cheeses and jams she likes the way i make bread ( and really it was just a hacks guess but i wrote everything down when i made it so its repeatable ),

coming in with the late plate with the loaf and bits on it i see her nostrils flair up and the rolls to look at me, her thick lush lips spreading to create a dreamy smile as the makeup from the party we went to the night before still looking stunning as normal in the morning with her thick batting lashes and blue eyelids (the are naturally blue in tone actually but she darkens it to bring focus to her gold eyes )  "hmmm morning handsome, ohh for me ?" she asked coyly knowing it it was for her but I smile "course it is woman now gimme a kiss" without hesitation she grabbed me picking and sitting her upon her mountains of breast me breaking beits of the loaf as she opened her mouth a little and poking her tongue to take some. using that oh so skilled tongue to coil it and take it to her mouth "hmm, love how you make this bread baby" she said stroking my hair and kissing me.

after we finished the loaf and all the things with it i just lay with her a little as we always do but then i felt into my pocket and smiled "Venus honey can you close your eyes juuust a moment?" she smiled closing them really slowly. she hears a slight metal rattle and my arms go around her neck, her brow raises the ears perk up and a soft murring sound comes from her throat then i say" okay open them " she smiled and giggles a little bit "what are you up to you silly little ma...." she froze touching what i put on her neck in possible disbelieve and her eyes widened as she could feel what it was around her neck now "will you marry me Venus?..." her hand trembled a little from the necklace so I gently put my hand on hers, then the other one on her cheek. the necklace was a marriage collar. and i had worked my arse off for nearing a year to get the right one. not the most fancy or expensive but the one that was special like she was. a blue semi rare metal band with three diamond like stones set to it. simple. sophisticated and beautiful. so, she curld her large fingers around mine starting to cry and shake a little not expecting this at all as a huge smiled came over her face. she had a glow about her when she smiled you know what i mean ? shes and old lady but as soon as she smiled like this she looked younger and more beautiful than ladies half her age. 

looking me in the eyes her heart fluttering the chest i was sat on pumping trying to contain her excitement as she softly and shakilly "yes. I  will" .

well this was just a nice little drawing i did in Photoshop cs5 portable and paint tool Sai but sketched on paper :] took near abouts 3 hours. also playing with the first person perspective. 

now here is the stick peeps . my good buddy rico :iconomnoproxyl33t: said to me " i been having an idea about the high sergal amazons and their marage system. what is they have metal bands around the neck instead of rings ? kinda shows a symbol of ownership towards each other and a bond that is able to be taken off." and personally i kinda liked the sound of that seeing as they are semi amazonian and such :D so its here to stay 
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Gorgeous. She seems like a real catch