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a beautiful world by brokencreation a beautiful world by brokencreation
first shout out to the person who posted the wonderful stock i used on this drawing

:iconnikaede: for the main scene of these lovely cliff edges ^^

i was planning to use this a long time ago but never did as i had no good use for it. but well here ya go ^^ i think it came out pretty good. and thanks for letting me use it ^^

took me about 5 hours all in all on photoshop cs5

i would love more critique on these please ^^
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I'm here on behalf of :iconselftaughtartist: because your piece was in the group's critique requested folder.

Hey, so firstly, I really like this drawing. You really get a sense of distance and depth, and adventure from this. I absolutely love the way the sea and the buildings blend into one another. I also really like the figure in the foreground, his clothes and the lighting on him is spot on.

The thing which doesn't convince me too much is the way the cliffs fit into the drawing, they seem to be smaller and further away than the rest of the drawing, in a certain way. They are also a lot more realistic than the rest of the drawing which creates a strange mix of styles.
But these are details, overall it is a very strong piece.
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Mamaleen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm here on behalf of :iconselftaughtartist: because your piece was in the group's critique requested folder.
So, you've got a pretty nice thing here. But there are a few things that could get some improvement. I'm not sure if you all drew this, that would be awesome! But the main thing, I think that could use some improvement is the man. Under his left feet I see no shadow... Most times there is a bit shadow, but this makes it look like he's floating. And I think the light is coming from the front, then the shadow between his legs would be more light. Also, because the rest looks like a photograph, and I can clearly see he's drawn because of the lines in his jack, he is a bit out of place... Also, the rest looks a bit futuristic like, while the man looks very plain... I think he could use some more detail or something. But for the rest, good job! It looks awesome!
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brokencreation Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks but there is a shaddow and its very dark the practically black area in the bottom left
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Mamaleen Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes yes, but I think the shadow between his legs should be a bit shorter? For the rest, the shadow looks good!
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brokencreation Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
probably right. there are also allot of perspective issues in the drawing too sadly
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Mamaleen Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmmm... That's sad indeed, especially if you put so much time in it. Still I have the question, is everything drawn? Even if it isn't you made something great!
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brokencreation Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
only half of it . the rest is photo manipulation to create a painting "plate"
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Mamaleen Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah, it looks very interesting~
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brokencreation Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its not very difficult to do to be fair
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Sandexicutionist Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
God damn this is gorgeous!
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brokencreation Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwww thanks a bundle hunny
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