first shout out to the person who posted the wonderful stock i used on this drawing
for the main scene of these lovely cliff edges ^^
i was planning to use this a long time ago but never did as i had no good use for it. but well here ya go ^^ i think it came out pretty good. and thanks for letting me use it ^^
I'm here on behalf of because your piece was in the group's critique requested folder.
Hey, so firstly, I really like this drawing. You really get a sense of distance and depth, and adventure from this. I absolutely love the way the sea and the buildings blend into one another. I also really like the figure in the foreground, his clothes and the lighting on him is spot on.
The thing which doesn't convince me too much is the way the cliffs fit into the drawing, they seem to be smaller and further away than the rest of the drawing, in a certain way. They are also a lot more realistic than the rest of the drawing which creates a strange mix of styles. But these are details, overall it is a very strong piece.
I'm here on behalf of because your piece was in the group's critique requested folder. So, you've got a pretty nice thing here. But there are a few things that could get some improvement. I'm not sure if you all drew this, that would be awesome! But the main thing, I think that could use some improvement is the man. Under his left feet I see no shadow... Most times there is a bit shadow, but this makes it look like he's floating. And I think the light is coming from the front, then the shadow between his legs would be more light. Also, because the rest looks like a photograph, and I can clearly see he's drawn because of the lines in his jack, he is a bit out of place... Also, the rest looks a bit futuristic like, while the man looks very plain... I think he could use some more detail or something. But for the rest, good job! It looks awesome!
Hmmm... That's sad indeed, especially if you put so much time in it. Still I have the question, is everything drawn? Even if it isn't you made something great!
Hey, so firstly, I really like this drawing. You really get a sense of distance and depth, and adventure from this. I absolutely love the way the sea and the buildings blend into one another. I also really like the figure in the foreground, his clothes and the lighting on him is spot on.
The thing which doesn't convince me too much is the way the cliffs fit into the drawing, they seem to be smaller and further away than the rest of the drawing, in a certain way. They are also a lot more realistic than the rest of the drawing which creates a strange mix of styles.
But these are details, overall it is a very strong piece.
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