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Her little angel by brokencreation Her little angel by brokencreation

*This is a angel. No, she isn't and angel we know it. But in my mythos and imagination the universe is so vast if there is heaven and hell, and all that jazz, then all these other races have angels in their own shapes. This is one such alien angel. Her task to earn her wings and be forever connected to a mortals soul granting them right of way to the atheirial planes of peace, her given task was to take upon herself a child. One that was not of her own kind. She never expected to be so tightly connected to her charge, and she wouldn’t have it any other way. ( so you all know i actually based him of photos of myself when i was about 8 or 9, fuzzy hair and button nose, the woiks.)*


He, sadly, was orphaned. Being a space born child he has been bouncing around from colony to colony since he was six only ever getting to take with him two bags and this one little hand held console. His only real luxury was once in a while he would a new game for the toy, and an item of clothing his parents used to wear. One was  a antique pilots jacket his dad used to wear and and a scarf his mum almost never took off. He normally keept it in his bag, scared he will look like a sissy seeing as it was neon pink after all. 
He updated every week on the dot, at the help centre where orphans put themsevles up to be adopted, putting in a new photo each time. Sometimes he was quiet creative this time sending in the cool kid photo ears his dads bomber jacket big goofy smile and goggles a-top his head. The odd looking alien male (so he assumed anyway he sees so many different aliens he isn't ever sure of their gender) smiles at him saying in his odd accent 
"I’m sure someone will see this ay kid, now go update your profile and such and head to the waiting room I will let Medjala know your on your way up okay" the boy smiled 
" Thanks Garf and headed up stares there where a couple other kids in the waiting room some even from the same shelter as he was staying at as the day went on and he had some interviews but it just seemed he wasn't the right kind of kid for allot of these couples, few where mixed race but not really accustomed to raising human children. Their high maintenance compared to allot of the other alien species out their and the puberty stage really put them off and he only has a few more years till he hits that age range, and as the other kids wonder off either back to their shelters with friends or some lucky few their new family (was a probation period with the family went under scrutiny for about a month and a half Earth Standard Time) but once again he was just sat there by himself. 
But the time passed and he got ready to leave the center as the interview times were coming to a close when a Tybailian female ran upstairs. He called them dragons because of their tall and elegant reptilian bodies. With her chest fluttering rapidly, her slender chest flexed quickly as she struggled to catch her breath., adjusting her specially designed glasses with jittery hands. 
“Oh goodness I'm sorry I’m late! I wanted to come to the interviews for adoption," she breathlessly exclaimed. The woman at the desk gave a slight smile 
"Well, we do have one little fella waiting. Cailib dear, " the semi insectile alien woman said, “We have a young lady here who wants to interview you." his face lit up with a smile that would pretty much warm anyone's heart 
"A human child! this far from their home system," asked the beautiful dragon like alien.
"Yes... poor little thing comes here every standard week to refresh his profile with a new photo so he stays high on the list," she sighed feeling sorry for him. The alien dragon met him in a very sophisticated looking suit, where they get to have their interview and he smiled up at her.
“Your a dragon aren't you," he asked excitedly pulling out drawings that looked remarkably like her. 
Just crude and simple. like most kids drawings but the resemblance was there for sure.
"What's a dragon, Calib was it," she asked politely smiling at how excited he was then looked at the drawings and seeing the markings on his little doodles where just like hers,
"Wait.. have i found th... my child?" 
"Yeah my names Calib nice to meet you pretty dragon lady, " he beamed, all bright eyed and hopeful not making the connection of her and his drawings yet.
"Dragons are these really awesome magic beings that fly and sleep in gold and... Umm well in our stories their monster... But your a pretty one!" Smiling, she reached out to pat his cheek affectionately, "That's very sweet of you Cailib. My names Adalee, tell me did you dream of this "dragon" you drew here?" 
He nodded cheerfully and looked down at the doodle, "Yeah I did about a month ago. Wait, it looks like... Are you the one that was in my dream?" 
As the realization dawned on him, the dam burst and he started telling her all these dreams he had about dragons ending with, “And ... and ... this one....was my mum...he said looking at the drawing of the dragon that he had drawn, with it’s remarkable similarities to Adalee, defined by theo fleeting memory of her real face.
The alien lay who had unwittingly spent over two hours with this energetic, happy young boy drew her in with his enthusiasm, and determination to succeed, a feeling of maternal warmth washed over her. 
A strong desire to just take hold of him and hold his head to his chest letting him hear her gentile beating heart
" Cailib. Come, I am going to take you with me." 
A huge smile lit up his face, and just as it was about to explode in completely uncontrolled tears of happiness, he grabbed an hold of her and clung like the life line she was.
"You really mean it!? " 
She stoked his head gently, holding him to her with ehr other arm, her heart swelling with affection.
"Yes Cailib, now lets pick up your bags, and we can go."
“THANK YOU ADALEE,” was all he could say before the stress, the frustration and the effort of his existence claimed him, his new mother curling around him while he cried in joy.



After the requiered probation period a social worked came to interview him, to see if his new home was suitable, and if he was happy and wanted to stay
At last, after all of his waiting, after all of his hardship, his patience was rewarded, the proper red tape giving him a second last name ' Cailib Mitchall Adalee'. 
He was now Adalee’s son, gaining regular meals, allowing him to fill out, causing him to gain weight, and he even got new clothing! And she was even taking him to register for school! After another day of preparations for improving his new life, he was so tired he struggled to not fall asleep on the transport pods, his head wobbling and snapping back to wakeful ness only to droop down again. 
Finally he lost the battle, and his mother had to carry him and his things to their home on this giant space colony, and taking him inside to place his things in his room (His own Room!)
Singing softly she released a shimmering, translucent behind her crested head and her cloths seem to just flake away, her son waking just enough to see this wondrous spectacle as mother held him with such care.
“You really are a dragon Mummy..." 
She smiled softly, kissing him between the eyes tenderly beofre speaking in a soft, gentile tone; "No, not quiet my dear Cailib. Just rest for now." 
He nodded dreamily as she carried him to her bed and held him close to her breast, feeling the small boy breath evenly. 
Gently she played with his hair as she lowered them down to lay over her sheets, cradling him close, stilling humming the little tune as he slept in her arms secure in his new life.
Then she herself, fell asleep, holding her little human boy.
EDIT!!!!!!1111ONE 

the story has had a slight re write as a person less tired than myself and much better grammer went through it and changed a few bits but keeping the key story elements and developments ideas 8D 

and the lovely person who done so was :iconotakonsparadise:

GOOD GOD I CANT BELIEVE HOW LONG THAT SHORT STORY WAS FFFFFUCK once again sorry if the grammar is rather shoddy but i wrote rhis at 6 am in the morning while watching vids unable to sleep so FUCKING LIKE IT OR LUMP IT ! 

the drawing itself is just a little sketch done in paint till sia * yeah i know right me using sai *

don't remember how long it took but i hope you guys like this little doodle i threw together she may be a permanent feature 
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:icondelecion:
Delecion Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
great art and story)) @_@ (i think you have a new watcher)
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well thank you very much 8D
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HewyToonmore Featured By Owner Edited Apr 11, 2015
Wow... That was beautiful. :)
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brokencreation Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why thank you bery much 9w9
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cloakersenpai Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015
I cri every time
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awww XD
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risingstar1011 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015
I have always appreciated art and stories of anthros adopting human children for several reasons, not the least being love that crosses the greatest boundaries. Sadly the good ones like yours are few and far between.

Can we see these two a few years in the future?
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brokencreation Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i was thinking that actually. he uses his rather dtong mind to build and maintain machines or war basically. not what he wanted to do but he got used to but and only in his late teens too. but there will be moments where he wonders if he is a bad person and all that
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jazz316 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
Amazing story and Amazing picture. you really should continue this
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks mate 8D I appreciate 
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jazz316 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015
Your most welcome. If you would like I could send you a note with more ideas for pics on it
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BlkkGryphon Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Emotional story amazing pic just beautiful
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much
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BlkkGryphon Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
You're welcome
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Dalicris Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So damn envious ;_;
Anyway, wonderful pic.
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very much
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lord-of-the-shadows1 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
so beautiful well done! :happycry: revamp 
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks a bundle 
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Zepher87 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
Very awesome story and pic. Would love to see more of the two of them and different angel's of her too.
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i have some doodles i need to find actually of when they are older and he is going into military applications 
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Zepher87 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
Cool, how does she feel about that?
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she understand why he dose it. he lost his original family because they where just ill equipt to fight the enemy that came and pretty much decimated a hole city sized colony ship.
Out of about 50k pluss people only about 5k survived. and he promised himself he wont let something like that happen anymore. so he decided to go into military technology and studied almost obsessively only stopping to try be adopted or drawing what he sees in his dreams  
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Zepher87 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
5k out of 50k is a lot more then would be expected other wise. if they were really decimated then less then a hundred would only have survived. I would say low double digits.
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i only make this stuff up as I go mate I don't actually sit here and work out the details XD 
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Zepher87 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014
Oh I get it, I do to.^^ Let me know if I can help at all or anything, I like to help others^^
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Kinggigasmon Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So sweet!
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brokencreation Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks buddeh
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mross55 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
I do believe in heaven and hell as though there real places. That being said your idea of an angel makes a lot of since. Thank you for brooding my understanding of what angels and demons are or can be depending on what we humans believe what is real. 
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome. I was just taking an outside look in I guess you can say :]
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SktrbyEd Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014
Beautiful
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks mate 
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SktrbyEd Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014
You're Welcome!
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LaofingMa Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
Amazing picture . I loved the story with it to. 
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you kindly ;;w;;
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Allfather-Vohas Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When I came here, it was because of the title. I looked at the picture for about three seconds, then I read the entire story non-stop. I like the story better for some reason.
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it was re-written from a story i wrote. its the same story but better written 
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:iconallfather-vohas:
Allfather-Vohas Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Still, It was very good. Went with the picture perfectly, though, May I ask a few questions about the Story though...?
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
okay sure. it was made on the spot so i dunno what help i will have for ya 
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Allfather-Vohas Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well, What I have in mind isn't too complicated. What I want to know first is that the boy saw his new Mother in his dreams and she seemed to know it, or rather suspect it. My question is, how is that possible...? You said She's some kind of Alien Angel... Still.
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brokencreation Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"god" basically said the one who will adopt you will know you before seeing you basically. and ya dont really need a possible in fantasy sci fi stuff for the biblical stuff. like asking why are the giants in the hobbit film made of rock ? when you could just watch the awesome scene of the two mountains coming at each other while the dwarfs are trying to travel on their path 
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Allfather-Vohas Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
True. (Awesome scene by the way.) It just makes for a more interesting plot. Somethings just should... and Shouldn't have more to it. Still though, It's one picture, but it COULD be an entire story.
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brokencreation Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dont have the time for stories really. to much to do and too many ideas
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alfaDragonGuard Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
When was this updated because I reread it and could swear its different?
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it hasn't changed though. or are you talking about the actual story ? if so it was like a couple days after i posted it 
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Watchuwant21 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
Beauty of the world all in one child, waiting to be seen by someone, an amazing feeling of love and passion, leaving an exquisite taste of pure heartfelt love
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
uvu yeah i did another one where he is sat in the family center on the colony ship 
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Watchuwant21 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
Did ya finish it, and plan on posting it, or is it still in the WIP phase
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:iconbrokencreation:
brokencreation Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sketch on paper

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:iconwatchuwant21:
Watchuwant21 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
Ah, I see
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Goldham92 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
I love the story and how u made the two bond together. I had a similar idea on my story that im working on.
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